Sunday, May 31, 2009

my preface

Once upon a time, there was innocence. There was Adam, and there was Eve, and before the apple, there was innocence. But there is always evil, lurking in the shadows even in the most pure and godliest places.
What most people don’t know about the story of Adam and Eve and their garden is the story of the apple seeds. When Eve first fell under the spell of the snake, she was so shocked at how delicious this forbidden fruit was that she dropped the apple, and a seed fell out of the apple and disappeared into the grass.
Immediately Eve was tainted by the spell in the forbidden fruit, and she ran to find Adam and plucked a ripe, red apple for him from the tree.
Once Adam bit into the apple, he too was startled by the taste that was dancing on his tongue that he dropped his apple, and another seed fell into the ground. God descended upon them then, and, well, you know the rest of the story.
But what you don’t know is the story about what happened over the next few years. The seeds grew into trees, side by side, and as the garden of Eden was forgotten by the children of Adam and Eve, the two trees twisted together, supporting each other as though twins, holding each other up, forever scarring the fate of the universe.

Saturday, May 30, 2009

aghhhh

I have no clue how to start my story. I'm rewriting most of it so I can bring it away from the whole TWILIGHT scene and make it into something better (sorry stephenie meyers but it had to be said)
anyone have any ideas? i'm completely stuck. I wrote about 6 different beginining and they all suck =(

Thursday, May 14, 2009

bumper cars

two words and BAM! just like that i'm transported back in time and i'm re-living a memory i didn't even know i had.

the time and place is the day we met in the cool summer drizzle at that carnival and me shyly watching as your bumper car was slammed into the corner of the floor where on the outside of the fence i was standing. your eyes widened as they locked on mine and i looked away, embarrased.
when the ride let out you whispered something into Brittney's ear and your eyes locked on mine again and being the coward that i was i looked away. I didn't hear you come up behind me but when your arms wrapped around my waist i leaned back into you, knowing it was you.
"Hello!" You yelled in my ear. I tilted my head to the side and caught your gorgeous green eyes.
"Hello!" I yelled back. You let go of my waist with your arms but hooked one thumb in my belt loop pulling me closer for a second before walking away.

Monday, May 11, 2009

I walk the line like johnny cash

So mommy brought home something called a moon flower .. it blooms on the full moon at night .. how awesome is that? o and also...
i'm soo obsessed with this song called Just Impolite by plushgun. The music to it kinda sucks but the lyrics = amazzinngg<3333

Friday night became so lonely,
When you came to make a break,
That seemed to take all day to make me angry 'cause ILike you,
maybe I'm just Like You
Holding on to something that we know we can not hold
or fold it seems it seems we just can't forget
Are you frightened, by perfection?
Is this who you are,
not who you want to be,
I walk the line like Johnny Cash
I made the bus in seconds flat
I called your line too many times
I'm not obsessed, just impolite.
Sunday came and went so quickly
now you say you want me back
you will hold on, despite my cons,
it seems we're meant to hate it!
Being so dependent.
But it seems we can believe that we're two peas in this pod
we call New York, gets so lonesome.
Are you frightened, by neglection?
Am I who you want to see yourself to be?
I walk the line like Johnny Cash
I made the bus in seconds flat
I called your line too many timesI'm not obsessed, just impolite
You're stuck on me, you don't know why
Can't leave me anytime you try
They say that everybody criesso don't think twice 'cause it's alright.
Stay here,
touching you, touching the light in your eyes
that keeps coming back

Thursday, May 7, 2009

The Complete Outline

Kay so here's the complete and final outline. Ready? Okay.

  • St. Michael created Khepri who is the first vampire. She ended up drinking from her cat (Egyptians thought cats were godly or whatever - i'll elaborate that more in my story) and she ended up turning her cat into a vampire. Horrified with what she did, she sent her cat and her daughter over to europe away from what Khepri has become.
  • Back into history - Gods and Godesses' affairs in greece and such often lead to people claiming that their son/daughter was a God's son. These children by Gods are going to be where Witches come from. Khepri's cat spread the vampirism to the other cats (who were witches' familiars) to rats who got into italy over time.
  • Still in history - Romulus and Remus were the two twins who fought over Rome. The wolf who was said to of raised them was supposedly Artemis, the goddess. When Remus lost he went to start over in a place where nobody would know him. He went to America where he devised a plan to create his own "species" of werewolves with the natives there.
  • The wolves in Italy kept low until the vampires came into existence. They asked for the witches' help because their "species" are like cousins basically. They are related by Artemis.
  • The vampires got revenge in salem
  • Everything settled down and peace was made, except they didn't know about Remus.
  • Khepri's great (etc) daughter is Ariana (the grandmother) and Vivian (main character)
  • Vivian has to stop Remus's "army".

too confusing??

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Junior Year

So guys, did I ever mention how much Junior Year sucks???? I feel like i have no free time to myself =\
my life is literally; school, work, riding.
not to mention i have my chem and math tutors. kill me now *rolls eyes*
it's hard to work on a book when i have to worry about 2-dichloride and statistics and shit. its like the weekends are the only time i have for writing.
which kinda sucks cuz weekends is supposed to be kickin back with ur friends right?
wrong.
too bad my friends can't balance out the whole best friends + boyfriends = HANG OUT WITH ME! equation. not everyone is as talented as me =p

eh whateverrrr
i just cant wait til summerrrr

Saturday, May 2, 2009

Romulus and Remus

I was looking in my old stuff to find something to submit to a writing camp, and I came across an essay simply titled "Rome was created by two brothers" which sparked an idea.

Rome is in Italy.
It was supposedly created by two brothers who were raised by the Lupa, or the Wolf. Lupa is a name for the priestesses of a fox goddess, leading to an alternative theory that the wolf was human.

Hmmmmmmm .. looking more into this theory. I'll get back to you followers soon.

Friday, May 1, 2009

x-men origins


I'm an official dork. X-men made me cry. I'm not guna give it away, but let me tell u that wolverine is one of the most heartbreaking characters i've ever come across.

we're introduced to a lot of new mutants, one of which being this guy Gambit who i'm FREAKIN IN LOVE WITH! he's this magician type mutant annnnd i love him =)


Comment me if you see it and let me kno what you guys thinkkkkkkk


on the bright side it gave me a new idea =D